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However I do think it looks fine.
And well, my relationship with how to make a certain piece of art look nice based on theories is a bit... bipolar.
On the one hand, those theories interest me, for there usually is some psychology involved and I hardly ever find that uninteresting. And sure it's not that they are untrue...
However what I question is whether they create results that are more right than the results created purely based on 'what feels/seems right'.
Perhaps I only like to turn to theories when I have a feeling something isn't right about the piece I made, but can't really figure out how to correct it.
So I will keep this in mind, but for now I think I'm just gonna let things be (also partially because I feel I would mostly mess things up if I'd go fuzzing with the design again now, I'm not that good with typography and all yet).
Could you further detail your criticsm though? For I have much to learn still in the area of designing (clothes) and I think I could learn something if you'd make your criticsm a bit more in debt.
I mean without the man figure, there isn't really anything to this design now is there? At least nothing that I view as original.
Besides, if I'd remove him the entry would lose that which makes it original.
I mean then it would just be a note with some words. I would just be one of the many boring entries where the designer apparently never thought there would be something beyond notes and (people with) headphones. Sure, it's not like you can find a shirt that looks like that in every other store.
Truly, I'd rather lose any contest with a design that I personally like, that I think looks original, than win with a design that bores me and feels like anyone else could have made it.